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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2014-01-10 12:26 PM


Sun shines from the sky of human desire
like a laser to burn the deep down within
and it shatters reserves of protective measures
to make of denial a pile of ash.

So denial made mobile melds and joins
with the wind of circumstance
and creates a thick and dense overlay
over the rest of a life.

This process is known as converting the whole
into small and manageable portions
to make of the burden no hardship
for one who owns and carries denial.

But always there are the corners, you know,
where denial collects and grows in stature
and the cleaner must clean and clean again
and again and again and again.

And this conversion and clean-up process
no chore to be always despised
because it allows a step into the truth
of deep down human desire.

Break up and spread denial to be
in the freedom of one’s own truth
because compacted denial a forever lie
that burdens and weighs down the soul.

Helen / 10 January 2014

© Copyright 2014 Helen - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-01-10 12:57 PM


Ahhh . . . But denial we continue to do until, if we are fortunate or wise or both, we allow the light to shine on denial in the furthermost corner of the room and the light uncovers truth and reduces the rest to ashes.

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

Gale
Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
2 posted 2014-01-10 02:05 PM


A problematic poem!
What to do with doubts and denial?

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2014-01-10 08:51 PM


Denial is useless. Better to face the truth as painful as it may be. Well written, Helen.
                              Ida

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2014-01-11 01:43 PM


Your thoughts are always so powerful and always worth pondering.  Denial seems to waver between reality and what was.  Hugs to you lady Sunday .
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
5 posted 2014-01-11 01:55 PM


Thanks everyone and, Bluesy, you are so right.  I guess "what was" stepped into my reality again and I decided not to deny it - for the time being, that is.


EmmaRose
Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
6 posted 2014-01-11 02:40 PM


life lesson accumulated as we go along, still it is sometimes easier to not digest truth.
wise words of  yours inspire

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