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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2014-01-09 09:46 PM


        Lunar Incantations

Ancient incandescent orb of
    magic and mystery
who talks against time,
and paints these lovely ‘endless’
  hills and forests
in soft-silver moonbeam shadows,
just beyond the twilight evening
  afterglow …
bright-imperfect sky mirror
reflection of ourselves,
who pulls the tides of land, sea,
  and love,
grand inspiration of poets, dreamers,
lovers, moonatics, and fools ...
may you shine on in resplendent glory
forever in our finest infinite cosmic
  dreams

               --- b. e. adams (1/9/2014)

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (01-10-2014 08:48 AM).]

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-01-10 09:13 AM


Ahhh . . . Yes, the magic of nature and all its wonderment spelled out masterfully within the confines of the poets thoughts.

~*~ Among my most prized possessions are the words that I have never spoken. ~*~

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2014-01-10 08:53 PM


You dress the moon in a new splendor, Bruce.
                                      Ida

tracie66
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3 posted 2015-02-01 07:28 AM


such beauty in these words, this is a gorgeous render! love it!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2015-02-01 01:20 PM


thanks so much for 'resurrecting' this write and for your comment/reply post on it!

I believe I would tend to 'modify' the Channing quote though to:

Love is the melody of the heart,
   the harmony of the spirit ...
    and the song of the universe


tracie66
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5 posted 2015-02-02 05:34 AM


wonderful modification of Channing!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2015-02-02 10:10 AM


thanks! (it just seemed a lil' 'incomplete' to me in original form) ...
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