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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-01-08 08:12 AM




man in the moon
looking at us down below
old man in the moon
checking me out
as I’m chillin’ and groovin’
with a bottle of red, red wine
that n’er runs dry
got yer eye on old sun
creepin’ o’er the horizon
sigh . . .
tomorrow night is another day

©December 5, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~

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Gale
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1 posted 2014-01-08 01:59 PM


Nicely written, Jerry,
and I saw the picture, it's funny,
but you should repair the "image" part of your post )


JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-01-08 03:00 PM


Thanks Gale, I did repair the link.

~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~

EmmaRose
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3 posted 2014-01-14 08:47 PM


this is one spooky haunting moon.
Pass the moonshine

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-01-14 09:02 PM


Yeah you're right about the moonshine. An uncle of mine made moonshine and it was the clearest and smoothest shine I had ever drank. He got busted though, he and the sheriff he was paying off to operate had a falling out. Appreciate your presence, Emma.

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

EmmaRose
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5 posted 2014-01-18 03:33 PM


you weave great tales, or is it tails?
nevertheless, you're a wealth of a life lived

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2014-01-18 03:40 PM


Thanks for returning and commenting again, Emma. Tales or tails, I'll never tell. Heh.Heh!

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

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