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we danced as leaves
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we danced as leaves |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest 
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we danced as leaves flirting at the sweep of the wind's interception embracing by accident crisscrossing in shadow neither written in permanence nor destined for immortality dancing as leaves, flirting by happenstance only to collaborate upon the kindness of the winds. [This message has been edited by EmmaRose (01-07-2014 12:23 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Excellent lines within the confines of this stellar poem, Emma. Your poetical way with words is absolutely on display here. Thank you for sharing this beauty. ~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thank you for this one. Not every encounter has to be earth-shaking in order to be memorable. I enjoyed the whimsy, and appreciate the feeling. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I'll tell you Emma, you had me at, "flirting at the sweep of the wind's interception" what a gorgeous line.. and how great to finally see you in your lovely picture.. you always impress with your writing  |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Beautiful...captured well. Whimsical as the winds of Fate. Never know where the next gust may take us... Too bad the Winter seems to come... ...too soon. CG |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most apt analogy ... fine 'penning!' |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I am loving this.... I can't wait to find more from you Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful, EmmaRose. I felt the ache in the memories. Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I love the great idea of the poem, the transcendance of the Wind for the leaves, it is really brilliant and accurately poetical, thanks a lot yann |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Always such a pleasure to read you Emma. You stir my senses and make my heart flutter. The wind never felt so good. Lovely, lady. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
thank you fellow Pipsters for your sweet words always appreciated |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
a pleasure to read...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To enhance what James says: it is an extreme pleasure to read this excellent poem. I actually merged with your words and danced along. Margherita |
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