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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2014-01-06 09:07 PM


Black Ice

I didn't see it coming:
The brakes would not stop
The wheels would not turn
And then time stood still
I stood still in my car
While the world turned


Juju




-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos


[This message has been edited by Juju (01-07-2014 07:29 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-01-06 10:53 PM


Absolutely frozen in time fear.

~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2014-01-07 02:31 AM


I know that fear, Juju. Well done.
                              Ida

EmmaRose
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3 posted 2014-01-07 10:26 AM


gut wrenching feel to this good poetry
Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2014-01-07 04:16 PM


It's certainly an odd feeling when you turn the steering wheel and the car keeps going where it was going.  Enjoyed this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Gale
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5 posted 2014-01-07 10:14 PM


Terrible feeling!
And you've described it so well, Juju )

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6 posted 2014-01-10 09:15 PM


Wow....
Julie, just....

Wow

Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition

2islander2
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7 posted 2014-01-11 07:45 AM


real or metaphorical, it is outstanding, thanks for the moving reading,

yann

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2014-01-11 05:47 PM


enjoyed...James
Paul Wilson
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9 posted 2014-01-27 11:34 AM


JuJu...Enjoyed very much. Makes me think about life and not knowing what the future
has in store for us...Paul

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Paul

tracie66
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10 posted 2015-02-17 10:27 PM


wonderful write!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

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