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Stars in Her Eyes
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Stars in Her Eyes |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Hollywood she stepped off the Greyhound stars in her eyes ten months later couldn’t see the stars in her eyes for the neon blitz boulevard walking the street trying to make the rent the stars in her eyes were forever vanished inside a crack pipe ©December 1, 2013 / Jerry at Bolton ~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
A harsh reality. And the scenario could be so much worse sad to say. You are the king of in your face honesty. Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good morning Lori. Thank you for your constant support here in the Blue Room. ~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~ |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
I clicked because the title reminded me of one of my poems and nostalgia etc. and i am truly glad i read this poem its honest and to the point without losing anything. Richard |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I am glad you like my slice of life poem, Richard, and thank you. ~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A sad slice of life but too often true and poets tell the truth, Jerry. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, it is sad, Ira, but as you say, truth is the truth. ~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
yes , reaching for stars, and sinking In its never as bright lure to danger very relatable truths in your poem for many |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good morning Emma, thank you for being here and for your nice comments. ~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~ |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Having lived in Anaheim (just South of LA), I have seen this play itself out far too many times.... GREAT job.... Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, I have lived and worked in Hollywood. There are some sad situations that, you bet. Thanks Ringo. If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear. |
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