Open Poetry #49 |
Simplicity |
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
~~~ Mid-morning's aeronaut rises from favored cup ... Colombia's savory bouquet co-mingled with silence as respite whispers of another day Floating ... somewhere . . . beneath canopies of hand-dyed batik sharing moments basking in lingered reverie Simplicity ... First sip to last sigh ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Okay, I can relate to that first sip of "Colombia's savory bouquet," although I had to look up batik. I have a cup of the java sitting to the left of this keyboard. Liked your different way of assessing the wonders of this magical brew. ~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is a quiet, somehow comfortable, poem. Rather like the cup, I suspect. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I can smell the aroma and see the places that it took you. Wonderful imagery comes from the sense of smell and taste |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A soothing start, Rex. Ida |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Mmmm, coffee is much more than just a drink as you have deftly described. It is a wonderfully unique ritual. Lori |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Simplicity, indeed. thoroughly enjoyed Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Delicious . . . both the poem and the coffee! Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
simple facts and things are sometimes the most delicious, thanks for the moving reading yann |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
so wonderful to read you again my friend Love is the life of the soul... |
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