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Nan
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0 posted 2014-01-01 12:10 PM



My Happy New Year Pantoum (repost)

        Behold this day a year anew
        Regale the dawn with welcome tide
        What e’er tomorrow may ensue
        Cast yesterday’s lament aside

        Regale the dawn with welcome tide
        Pine not for auld lang syne now spent
        Cast yesterday’s lament aside
        Apprised from time in precedent

          Pine not for auld lang syne now spent
        Life’s guarantee by moments found
        Apprised from time in precedent
        There’s surety in life’s redound

          Life’s guarantee by moments found
        Rejoice in each new morning ray
        There’s surety in life’s redound
        Foresee ahead enlightened day

        Rejoice in each new morning ray
        Futurity’s from past defined
        Foresee ahead enlightened day
        Embrace the new with open mind

        Futurity’s from past defined
        What e’er tomorrow may ensue
        Embrace the new with open mind
        Behold this day a year anew…  


Happy New Year to All  

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1 posted 2014-01-01 12:33 PM


Happy New Year, Nan!

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2 posted 2014-01-01 09:04 AM


Wonderful uplifting poetry Nan.

~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2014-01-01 09:19 AM


Happy New Year Nan! Thanks for looking forward once again to the New Year!

Lori  

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4 posted 2014-01-01 09:55 AM


There aren't many poets who can write one of these. I wouldn't attempt it. This is a masterpiece for sure by a master poetess. I hope this is published
Well done, My friend
Liz

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5 posted 2014-01-01 10:57 AM


A pantoum is challenging enough, let alone an extended one.  Well done.

And a rich New Year to you, Nan!

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6 posted 2014-01-02 08:30 AM


Happy New Year Nan... Nice piece to start this new year

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7 posted 2014-01-02 03:15 PM


Happy New Year Nan!!  Love the poem!
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8 posted 2014-01-02 07:34 PM


It seems that yet another year has passed,
As once again, we wend on paths unknown,
Guided by our memories past, each year recast,
In seek of solace; to our sins atone.

As once again we wend, on paths unknown
through fog and bramble, more questions asked,
In seek of solace; to our sins atone,
Whil'st once again in to dark shadows cast.

Through fog and bramble, more questions asked,
No answers delivered, no mercies shown,
Whil'st once again in to dark shadows cast,
With memories, unable to disown.

No answers are delivered, no mercies shown,
Guided by past's memories, each year recast,
With memories unable to disown,
Alas, it seems that yet another year hath passed.

Nan, saw your poem when I got home tonight.  Haven't written in a while, thanks for the inspire.  Happy New Year.

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9 posted 2014-01-02 10:11 PM


How many years, now, have we known
the grace of you....for me, it has been
more like 14....and never do I tire
of all of the grace you bring!

Nan
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10 posted 2014-01-03 08:00 AM


Thank you all very sincerely for for taking time to visit.  I wish each and every one a glorious and happy new year  

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11 posted 2014-01-03 04:07 PM


and a happy new year to you, too! Hope it is as open to what comes as this one makes me feel.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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12 posted 2014-01-04 03:09 PM


lovely..

happy new year to you too Nan

Michael
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13 posted 2014-01-06 12:07 PM


"Cast yesterday's lament aside"

That's just what I am doing.   Love this one, Nan.  Glad you brought it back out.  May your new year be blessed.

Michael

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14 posted 2014-01-06 09:27 PM


Happy New Year, Nan!
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15 posted 2014-01-09 05:51 PM


Wonderfully written --- and in a way I for one not only couldn't write, but wouldn't even attempt.  Much enjoyed, and may your year be the best yet, my friend!

j

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16 posted 2014-01-10 01:03 AM


Great form, perfect accents and syllable counts, wonderful lines.....a work of art. Happy New Year, Nanners

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17 posted 2014-01-10 09:02 PM


I have never really liked rhyming poetry; however, I read this one again, just so I could enjoy it twice....

i'm glad it was my first read back.

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