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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-12-28 07:42 AM




I knew not my dreams,
For I had none.
I only wanted to get away,
That was the name of that song;

I walked for miles,
I rode the rails,
Did things I should've for survivals sake,
It seems like only yesterday.

©June 26, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~

© Copyright 2013 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2013-12-28 06:01 PM


You wrote this in June on my birthday.        It seems like only yesterday to me too on many ocassions.
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-12-28 06:07 PM


Ahhh . . . That is just delightful, Maureen. I couldn't have timed it any better, could I? Yes, I imagine you do have plenty of memories on that date.

~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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3 posted 2013-12-28 07:03 PM


Poignant words conveying a common state in many of us
Liked this short but relevant poem

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-12-28 07:06 PM


Appreciate you very kind words, Emma. Always good to see you here . . .

~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2013-12-28 08:45 PM


like yesterday indeed! The things I recall when I least expect it....Nothing to do but grimace and move on...

Lori

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2013-12-28 08:47 PM


Hello Lori. I don't grimace so much anymore.

~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2013-12-30 08:05 PM


nice writing...James
JerryPat2
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8 posted 2013-12-30 08:08 PM


Thanks James . . .

~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~

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