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luminosity
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since 2005-11-18
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0 posted 2013-12-27 03:02 PM


on page after page i painted a you
just perfect for a me
into my eyes you looked
and loved the me you saw
you touched my hand
drew me close
you were exactly what I need
but after so many years
my imagination has
worn thin and I
determined
the inevitable end is not worth the read
so now, lest someone partake
and make the same mistake as me
let us now close these
pages of make believe


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2013-12-27 03:34 PM


Yep. There are time when it is best to close the book on a situation before it evolves into more problems.

~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-27-2013 05:13 PM).]

luminosity
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since 2005-11-18
Posts 813

2 posted 2013-12-27 03:42 PM


sigh, no situation to speak of, this is just honesty, to myself, telling my deeply hidden dream its time to die, it has no future, it never has, love like you find on these pages of blue was just not meant for some of us...sigh thanks though for your ever kind replies
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2013-12-27 04:58 PM


Dreams like you find on these blue pages are meant for everybody.


Lori  

luminosity
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4 posted 2013-12-27 05:43 PM


thanks lori, for many years I believed that, but times change....oh well, I have a better place than this waiting for me on the other side and someone that loves me...unconditionally
suthern
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5 posted 2013-12-30 01:11 PM


We know many wear masks
On these pages blue
It's easy to wonder
If anything's true

There are some game players
And when they deceive
We hurt and feel foolish
For having believed

But amidst pretenders
Are many that feel
Your pain along with you
And whisper - we're real

We two have shared laughter
Too often shed tears
Though miles stretch between us
We've been friends for years

I'm too often silent
But across those miles
I know you're there for me
And that gives me smiles

As a new year beckons
And this old one ends
I vow to be better,
More thankful for friends

I pray each day blesses
A "one and only"
Joy, contentment and all
The best that can be!

Your fellow O&O
(((HUGS)))

luminosity
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since 2005-11-18
Posts 813

6 posted 2013-12-30 01:41 PM


ah..........thank you....now 'you' are real...and you mean much to me...thank you lady...with all my heart...or what is still left of it...seems after it was shattered, I am still missing parts...sigh
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