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JamesMichael
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C'est Magnifique

A woman I met today
reminds me of a French woman
I knew long ago,
long, long ago,
she looks like her
she talks like her
but not in French,
thank goodness not in French,
for I could never understand
all the words she would say to me
when we made love
but it sounded very nice,
very, very nice
and sexy too
and when we spoke
the universal language
she would try to teach
me a few French words
but my mind was on other things,
soft and sensual things,
exciting moments
to remember forever,
and her kiss
so exquisite
so totally and
irresistably
marvelous.
She had it all
and she shared
her best with me,
c'est magnifique.

JamesLee
25December
2013

  

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OLIAS
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1 posted 12-26-2013 10:05 PM       View Profile for OLIAS   Email OLIAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OLIAS

Wow how weird, this is the same subject almost as a piece I have just written, that brings back great memories of France. Nicely written and much enjoyed thank you.

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

jwesley
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2 posted 12-26-2013 10:17 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Ha! Was there with you James...almost seeing, feeling as you...

enjoyed.

j.
Prasad Nataraj
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magical moments well captured James. Fine writing.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

2islander2
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hello james, it is always surprising to meet someone who reminds us a love, the poem is sensitive end emotionnal, i loved it,

in french, we say : "c'est magnifique"

have a nice day

yann
JerryPat2
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You have captured intimacy to the nth, James, thanks for sharing.

~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~

JamesMichael
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6 posted 12-27-2013 07:25 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Olias, jwesley, prasad, 2islander2 and Jerry for the nice responses...yann I wanted to use the French spelling but wasn't sure, I tried to correct it after you showed me the correct spelling...James
 
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