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2islander2
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by the sea


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I would remain hours to look at the sea
With her gigantic swell as a party,
Her anger of white tiger in the impressive claws
Both, and finally change the deep thoughts.

To gobble up the world seems its fate
Overcome the man who approaches without dreams
Teach him that the pride is made to sink
In the infinity of a wave, as a toy.

I would remain hours to look at the sea
Not to worry me any more, to sound the mystery
Of your hair, black as the ocean,
Where I drown myself, vain, in dark desires.
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enjoyed...James
OLIAS
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Nice write, I miss the sea.

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

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happy Christmas james , thanks

yann
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thanks olias

happy Christmas

yann
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Mystery of the sea and women, lot to wonder about, Yann. Fine writing. Enjoyed.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
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thanks parsad, there is a lot between women and sea, thanks for the supportive comment,


have a merry Christmas


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