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SilentShadow Junior Member
since 2006-04-20
Posts 32Fl. U.S.A. |
On this couch I lay my head, No room, no lover, no feather bed [This message has been edited by SilentShadow (12-23-2013 08:48 AM).] |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello , the solitude is well written and poignant, loved my reading happy Christmas yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very sad, dear Daniel. "No room" suggests a desperate situation. Many can do without "a lover" as love can be manifested in many other ways, but without a "room" suggests the grip of cold. Very poignant. May Christmas bring joy to the one you refer to in your poem and the "room" to feel at home as well. Love and peace. Margherita |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Very bleak in tone, I can feel the ache |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
So many connotations can be pulled from this. At it's basic, just plain emptiness... Well written. j. |
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