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SilentShadow
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0 posted 12-22-2013 11:35 PM       View Profile for SilentShadow   Email SilentShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SilentShadow

On this couch I lay my head,
No room, no lover, no feather bed

[This message has been edited by SilentShadow (12-23-2013 08:48 AM).]

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2islander2
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1 posted 12-23-2013 01:53 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

hello , the solitude is well written and poignant, loved my reading

happy Christmas


yann
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2 posted 12-23-2013 05:34 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Very sad, dear Daniel. "No room" suggests a desperate situation. Many can do without "a lover" as love can be manifested in many other ways, but without a "room" suggests the grip of cold.

Very poignant.

May Christmas bring joy to the one you refer to in your poem and the "room" to feel at home as well.

Love and peace.
Margherita
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3 posted 12-23-2013 07:57 AM       View Profile for EmmaRose   Email EmmaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EmmaRose

Very bleak in tone, I can feel the ache
jwesley
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4 posted 12-25-2013 07:51 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

So many connotations can be pulled from this.
At it's basic, just plain emptiness...

Well written.

j.
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