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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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You kissed me into vertigo and watched me fall into you. It felt good within your heart, a wide open space to fly safely into untold heights of wonder. We were rope dancers then and we never looked down, fearless we spread our wings to glide along sunlit trails. We stunned even the skies. Until we landed softly like exhausted butterflies upon foreign prairies where we poured our sweet memories into the corollas of distant flowers. |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
What a heart-warming poem, Margherita. Each line to me told a story which, all combined is one of the best poems of love I have ever read. You were blessed. ~*~ Your fences need to be horse-high, pig-tight and bull-strong. ~*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
such beauty and warm in your words Margherita, a breath taking poem who makes me thrill about love and its posssible heights, for some people, thanks a lot for the great reading have a nice day yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Jerry, for your heartwarming comment. You generated a broad smile on my face.  And yes, I was blessed, we were blessed!Margherita |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Yann, love is the poet's dream topic, isn't it? Thank you from my heart for your most loving comment. Double smiles now ... Margherita |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
Good except heights make me mildly nauseated |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The dream topic is usually a dream but you can make us believe, Margherita. Ida |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved it all...especially the title though. j. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, this is my new favorite of yours. I, too, love the title ... and love each line of the poem, itself. Merry Christmas. Alison |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Soft and airy, as the gossamer wings of a butterfly. Best not to touch...just enjoy the flight... CG |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Wow... so soft and delicate are the memories of this love. Enjoyed Margherita, Ms. E |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so beautiful Margherita. The words flow so softly. Just lovely. Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
very nice...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Richard, for your kind comment. I think that the heights of love are totally immune to that kind of reaction! Thank you so much, dear Ida. I love to write about love you know and if I had not experienced it, the inspiration would be too weak to make anyone believe I think. I really hope everyone on Earth may be blessed with love, it's what makes life bearable with all its challenges. Thank you, dear Jimmy, for your loving comment. In my childhood there were rope dancers who crossed the main square of my town from roof to roof and that vision remained impressed forever. Goosebumps! Dear Alison, thank you from my heart for telling me you love this. You brought a big smile and you warmed my heart. Merry Christmas to you. May you feel united with your loved ones who have gone Home this year. Yes, dear CastleGuard, that's what counts indeed, enjoying the flight. Thank you kindly for your loving comment. Dear Ebonygirl, thank you for commenting so lovingly, You are missed on our blue pages, please see what you can do and come back! Thank you, dear Kit, I much enjoyed your kind comment. It feels good to see you here. Dear James, thank you dearly. See? I have come back, there are times when we can't be present, but then suddenly we hear the call and find that writing a poem becomes a priority. Thank you for caring. Love to all. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful Margherita! Love, Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
((((Ericc)))) thank you from my heart. You hear me and know about these feelings. Love, Margherita |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Very expressive writing , well crafted with emotion I enjoyed this thank you all the very best of the season |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
young and fearless in love, fine writing Margherita.Enjoyed. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Olias, for your loving comment and my best wishes to you for a Merry Christmas and a nice holiday season. Good to see you! Dear Prasad, thank you for your kind remarks. Good to see you too! Waiting for the Christmas caps on our smilies ... Ron?Love and peace. Margherita |
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