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A Poet To His Love

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CastleGuard
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0 posted 12-13-2013 03:14 PM       View Profile for CastleGuard   Email CastleGuard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CastleGuard



My love for you - it never fades,
It glitters in all hues and shades;
It shines a light on shadows cast
By doubt and fear and remnant past.

But no dam will hold the river
Of my heart; no clamps the quiver
Of its beat - but where’s the fuel
That feeds this ever constant rule?

It's in the jewel of your heart:
'Tis there my love did take its start;
'Tis there the flint did strike the stone,
Sent fire to my flesh and bone.

Should my will ever wane its might,
My soul be ever without light --
Then I shall peer into your eyes
And feel the flames of Paradise.


CG
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paderewski
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1 posted 12-13-2013 03:25 PM       View Profile for paderewski   Email paderewski   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit paderewski's Home Page   View IP for paderewski

Excellent rhyming in this poets' passionate declaration.

~*~ Old is when “getting a little action” means you don't need to take any fiber today. ~*~
ponderthepoetorrsx
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2 posted 12-13-2013 03:34 PM       View Profile for ponderthepoetorrsx   Email ponderthepoetorrsx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ponderthepoetorrsx

Good great and yet? Also passionate
secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 12-13-2013 09:53 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

Romanticism most fine ...

love the last two lines in particular!
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 12-14-2013 10:59 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Wonderfully romantic and display of devotion! Heart warming! Much enjoyed!

Lori
2islander2
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by the sea


5 posted 12-14-2013 11:03 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

so romantic daclaration and gracious images, thanks for the lovely write and "gift"

have a nice day

yann
Margherita
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Eternity


6 posted 12-14-2013 12:29 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Wonderful romanticism and very well orchestrated rhymes indeed. A joy to read.

Margherita
Paula Finn
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7 posted 12-14-2013 09:31 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

lovely
CastleGuard
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8 posted 12-15-2013 03:23 AM       View Profile for CastleGuard   Email CastleGuard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CastleGuard


Thank you everyone so much for stopping by and for the words of appreciation and the positive comments - means so much to me.

CG
JamesMichael
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9 posted 12-28-2013 08:08 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice thoughts on love...James
 
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