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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2013-12-12 06:37 PM




winter's frost
disguises the curves
hiding the natural
under layers of imagination
I welcome the deception --
till the heat of the fireplace
melts the disguise
and reveals your beauty...

CG

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paderewski
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1 posted 2013-12-12 07:21 PM


I can understand the layers of imagination, sometimes that thwarts the real person.

~*~ Old is when “getting a little action” means you don't need to take any fiber today. ~*~

KentAshbyKorb
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since 2013-05-05
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2 posted 2013-12-12 07:58 PM


Heating the heart!!!
ponderthepoetorrsx
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3 posted 2013-12-12 08:35 PM


Perfect metaphor

Richard

Amaryllis2
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4 posted 2013-12-12 10:51 PM


Lovely!
CastleGuard
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5 posted 2013-12-15 02:33 AM



Thank you everyone for stopping by and commenting...appreciate your kind replies.

CG

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