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Amaryllis2
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0 posted 12-11-2013 04:47 PM       View Profile for Amaryllis2   Email Amaryllis2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Amaryllis2


A gentle call -

Come, sit with me
by snapping cinders tonight

wrapped in wool
and memories

We'll let the snow
turn blue with dusk

and remember who we were
© Copyright 2013 Amaryllis2 - All Rights Reserved
ponderthepoetorrsx
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1 posted 12-11-2013 05:02 PM       View Profile for ponderthepoetorrsx   Email ponderthepoetorrsx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ponderthepoetorrsx

"wrapped in wool
amd memories"
really hits home overall good poem

Richard

paderewski
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2 posted 12-11-2013 06:16 PM       View Profile for paderewski   Email paderewski   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit paderewski's Home Page   View IP for paderewski

Ahhh . . . What a very special poem as you think of your loved one, martyjo, very special indeed.

~*~ If we are what we eat, she's fast, easy and cheap. ~*~

Amaryllis2
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3 posted 12-11-2013 07:45 PM       View Profile for Amaryllis2   Email Amaryllis2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Amaryllis2

Nope it's just me, Sharon.  I lost my original 'Amaryllis' pw so had to make this new one
Thank you though, Jerry
Marchmadness
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4 posted 12-11-2013 11:51 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

A lovely poem, Amaryllis. I would love to come sit with you.
                             Ida
Gale
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5 posted 12-12-2013 03:47 AM       View Profile for Gale   Email Gale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gale

Much enjoyed your poem, Amaryllis!
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


6 posted 12-12-2013 05:56 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I love this!!!

and would love to add this as a mini quilted poem ornament for my tree this year.  Your words have a special meaning to me this year.

M
Margherita
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7 posted 12-12-2013 12:45 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Absolutely wonderful and delightfully creative, dear Amaryllis. So good to have the opportunity again to read your works!

Love,
Margherita
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where the wild flowers grow


8 posted 12-12-2013 03:35 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Ooohhh! I love the snapping cinders!
Krawdad
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9 posted 12-12-2013 04:37 PM       View Profile for Krawdad   Email Krawdad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krawdad

Warm, but with a chill.
Enjoyed.
Michael
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10 posted 12-12-2013 06:20 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Ooh, I really liked the ending to this.  Sometimes I really could use a reminder.

Michael
Amaryllis2
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11 posted 12-12-2013 10:50 PM       View Profile for Amaryllis2   Email Amaryllis2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Amaryllis2

Gosh...want to thank everyone who's commented on this little poem. .. Your words are surely appreciated!  
Amaryllis2
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12 posted 12-12-2013 10:56 PM       View Profile for Amaryllis2   Email Amaryllis2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Amaryllis2

Ps: nakedthoughts, I would be honored if you chose one of my works for your poem quilt!  Such a neat idea and I would be pleased to be included Thank you!
Kit McCallum
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13 posted 12-13-2013 09:10 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

"wrapped in wool
and memories"

You've painted a beautiful picture here with your words Amaryllis. Lovely phrasing, much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit
OwlSA
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14 posted 12-14-2013 05:11 AM       View Profile for OwlSA   Email OwlSA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OwlSA

It's good to see you and your beautiful poetry back here again, Amaryllis.

Owl
Amaryllis2
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15 posted 12-14-2013 09:16 AM       View Profile for Amaryllis2   Email Amaryllis2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Amaryllis2

Many thanks,  Kit and Owl
JamesMichael
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16 posted 12-27-2013 07:34 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

enjoyed...James
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


17 posted 12-29-2013 01:50 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

for you~~

    


Thanks

M
Krawdad
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18 posted 12-29-2013 09:12 PM       View Profile for Krawdad   Email Krawdad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krawdad

cozy
 
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