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Amaryllis2
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0 posted 2013-12-11 04:47 PM



A gentle call -

Come, sit with me
by snapping cinders tonight

wrapped in wool
and memories

We'll let the snow
turn blue with dusk

and remember who we were

© Copyright 2013 Amaryllis2 - All Rights Reserved
ponderthepoetorrsx
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1 posted 2013-12-11 05:02 PM


"wrapped in wool
amd memories"
really hits home overall good poem

Richard

paderewski
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2 posted 2013-12-11 06:16 PM


Ahhh . . . What a very special poem as you think of your loved one, martyjo, very special indeed.

~*~ If we are what we eat, she's fast, easy and cheap. ~*~

Amaryllis2
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3 posted 2013-12-11 07:45 PM


Nope it's just me, Sharon.  I lost my original 'Amaryllis' pw so had to make this new one
Thank you though, Jerry

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2013-12-11 11:51 PM


A lovely poem, Amaryllis. I would love to come sit with you.
                             Ida

Gale
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5 posted 2013-12-12 03:47 AM


Much enjoyed your poem, Amaryllis!
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2013-12-12 05:56 AM


I love this!!!

and would love to add this as a mini quilted poem ornament for my tree this year.  Your words have a special meaning to me this year.

M

Margherita
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7 posted 2013-12-12 12:45 PM


Absolutely wonderful and delightfully creative, dear Amaryllis. So good to have the opportunity again to read your works!

Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2013-12-12 03:35 PM


Ooohhh! I love the snapping cinders!
Krawdad
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9 posted 2013-12-12 04:37 PM


Warm, but with a chill.
Enjoyed.

Michael
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10 posted 2013-12-12 06:20 PM


Ooh, I really liked the ending to this.  Sometimes I really could use a reminder.

Michael

Amaryllis2
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11 posted 2013-12-12 10:50 PM


Gosh...want to thank everyone who's commented on this little poem. .. Your words are surely appreciated!  
Amaryllis2
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12 posted 2013-12-12 10:56 PM


Ps: nakedthoughts, I would be honored if you chose one of my works for your poem quilt!  Such a neat idea and I would be pleased to be included Thank you!
Kit McCallum
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13 posted 2013-12-13 09:10 AM


"wrapped in wool
and memories"

You've painted a beautiful picture here with your words Amaryllis. Lovely phrasing, much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

OwlSA
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14 posted 2013-12-14 05:11 AM


It's good to see you and your beautiful poetry back here again, Amaryllis.

Owl

Amaryllis2
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15 posted 2013-12-14 09:16 AM


Many thanks,  Kit and Owl
JamesMichael
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16 posted 2013-12-27 07:34 PM


enjoyed...James
nakdthoughts
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17 posted 2013-12-29 01:50 PM


for you~~

    


Thanks

M

Krawdad
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18 posted 2013-12-29 09:12 PM


cozy
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