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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2013-12-10 09:42 PM


Do u ever feel the swirling of the soul
like a breeze
no different then the movement of wind through your hair....
upward always upward...
listen it may be speaking
feel the swirling , hear the breeze
then let the wind of time guide u

Freedom is in the dance
do u hear the crickets
the timeless dance under moon
guided by the tides
the tides of Mother earth
the embrace of all that is living
from the tiniest of plant

Open up to the wonders
that surround us as gifts
Give thanks for the beauty
from raging thunder and lightning to
a kiss from gentle lips

Breath in an out for today will pass
life is in moments... make the moments last

© Copyright 2013 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2013-12-11 07:08 AM


Simply wonderful, Connie.

Enjoyed this very much! Just yesterday I have listened to a very particular Chorus of crickets. Must find the link for you.

http://www.natursymphonie.com/?Newsletter:Newsletter_06-2013
Scroll down the newsletter until you find the cricket picture and listen to the sample tune. It is the cricket's voice, slowed down. An exceptional experience.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

paderewski
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since 2011-02-04
Posts 287
Louisiana, USA
2 posted 2013-12-11 08:48 AM


There is so much that we don't understand about ourselves, the planet, and the possibility of an afterlife. Heaven? Reincarnation? Nothing? his was a eye-opening poem . . .

~*~ If we are what we eat, she's fast, easy and cheap. ~*~

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
3 posted 2013-12-11 11:45 AM


thankful to have these 'wonders' you speak of with such grace

Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
4 posted 2013-12-11 02:15 PM


Liked the message!

I've found this recently and recalled now while reading your poem


Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
5 posted 2013-12-11 02:35 PM


Thank u all so much

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

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