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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2013-12-08 11:16 PM


Let it Snow


How many dreams
Fall like little snow flakes
Until all has become white?

Or how the snow melts
When touched by my fingers
And burns this skin of mine

With all these dreams
Coming down to me at once
Just how much do I see?






-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

[This message has been edited by Juju (12-09-2013 06:59 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2013-12-08 11:18 PM


If you are looking,
my dear
then you will see all.

Lovely!

Krawdad
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2 posted 2013-12-09 01:52 AM


I have written my share of snow poems, but none like this.  You have given me ideas.
Enjoyed!  
Thanks, Juju.

paderewski
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3 posted 2013-12-09 07:57 AM


We see what we want to see for the most part.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
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4 posted 2013-12-09 09:03 AM


that world of falling white stuff sure brings out the muse
very cool poem

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2013-12-09 06:55 PM


I very much enjoyed this lovely piece Juju. Wonderful references to ponder.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Gale
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6 posted 2013-12-10 12:07 PM


A lovely poem, Juju!
Thank you for sharing!

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2013-12-10 12:40 PM


loved your words on this snowy day~~

M

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2013-12-10 10:25 PM


enjoyed...James
Margherita
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9 posted 2013-12-11 07:11 AM


Enchanting musings around snowflakes, dear Juju!

Margherita

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