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Until There Was You (#2)

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secondhanddreampoet
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    Until There Was You
    
On many a star-drenched night,
with the bright Winter moon as
   heavenís beacon,
fine silver shadow-memories
and dreams of youth and love
danced along the deep-forest
paths through these ancient
rocks and precipitous slopes
just beyond the conscious
mindís event horizon,
yet my insular world had lost
all joy, hope, and color,
and I had somehow forgotten
even how to look up Ö
until there was you.
Now my heart is that
grand Winter moon.

               --- b. e. adams (12/7/2013)

© Copyright 2013 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
paderewski
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Passionately done, Bruce. You always make a point of giving the reader the strength of your personal environment as you write of love and now.

~*~ You can't start the next chapter of your life if you keep re-reading the last one. ~*~
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


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'til there was you~~~

a favorite song  of mine

M
JamesMichael
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nice...James
Prasad Nataraj
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enjoyed it.fine writing.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

latearrival
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Excellent as usual.Jo
2islander2
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splendid, love gives wings and sense, thanks for the beautiful share
yann


 
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