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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2013-12-07 03:16 PM


    Until There Was You
    
On many a star-drenched night,
with the bright Winter moon as
   heaven’s beacon,
fine silver shadow-memories
and dreams of youth and love
danced along the deep-forest
paths through these ancient
rocks and precipitous slopes
just beyond the conscious
mind’s event horizon,
yet my insular world had lost
all joy, hope, and color,
and I had somehow forgotten
even how to look up …
until there was you.
Now my heart is that
grand Winter moon.

               --- b. e. adams (12/7/2013)


© Copyright 2013 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
paderewski
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since 2011-02-04
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Louisiana, USA
1 posted 2013-12-07 04:28 PM


Passionately done, Bruce. You always make a point of giving the reader the strength of your personal environment as you write of love and now.

~*~ You can't start the next chapter of your life if you keep re-reading the last one. ~*~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2013-12-12 06:22 AM


'til there was you~~~

a favorite song  of mine

M

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2013-12-26 07:10 PM


nice...James
Prasad Nataraj
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4 posted 2013-12-27 01:20 AM


enjoyed it.fine writing.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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5 posted 2013-12-27 01:26 AM


Excellent as usual.Jo
2islander2
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by the sea
6 posted 2013-12-27 01:29 AM


splendid, love gives wings and sense, thanks for the beautiful share
yann



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