Taking Measure of Intellect

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Open Poetry #48

Taking Measure of Intellect

paderewski
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since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

0 posted 2013-12-04 08:50 AM

transmigrate the expanse
of thought
past the rate of wonderment
at a velocity
unheard of
collective philosophy in unvarying instability
cosmos, time and space
in transcendent thaumaturgy

©July 4, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2013-12-04 09:37 AM

You knocked this one clear out of the realm! It landed right in the middle of my imagination. What an unexpected surprise!

Lori

paderewski
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since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

2 posted 2013-12-04 09:42 AM

Many thanks, Lori, your comments are a definite pick me up. Thanks again.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2013-12-04 11:38 AM

sounds like a good place
better than here, some days

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

4 posted 2013-12-04 11:45 AM

I know Emma. I just read and commented on your poem. Life is definitely a monster at times. We can do nothing else but keep putting one foot in front of the other and perchance find that everlasting place we desire.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

KentAshbyKorb
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since 2013-05-05

Posts 99
Nc USA

5 posted 2013-12-05 04:30 PM

Bravo!!!!

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

6 posted 2013-12-05 05:03 PM

Thanks Kent!

~*~ You can't start the next chapter of your life if you keep re-reading the last one. ~*~

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