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Falls fire

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KentAshbyKorb
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0 posted 11-24-2013 11:01 PM       View Profile for KentAshbyKorb   Email KentAshbyKorb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KentAshbyKorb


The sky a dying ember
To match what rests between
My eyes and all her members
It's fall that falls between

Blue to pink and purple
Orange and yellow leafs
Around the bent and circle
The circumvent so deep

The day within her casket
My heart the fires seat
Have but to simply bask in
The end of present feats!


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Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 01-12-2014 07:07 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Email Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

While joined together as one, each of your poem's quatrains seems to stand on it's own.

Nicely done in my opinion.

...just bein' Bluesy

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