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paderewski
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since 2011-02-04
Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

0 posted 2013-11-21 01:58 PM


the dark chasm
where my soul resided
no sun shined
love was imprisoned
ahhh . . .
but what you put there
will everlastingly stay
although delicate and sensitive
your love
hard as jewelers stone
sliced through the chasm of darkness
as if the miles did not exist
we became bound as one
by our brutal matter-of-fact styles
and if you sob
tears you shed splash into my chasm
like a scorching downpour
but your smile
ahhh . . . blinds like the sun
giving the instant
a very understandable moment
you and I
communicate through chats
internet chats
it is there
where we block out the world

your heart is my heart
mine yours
evermore there
never to tear
a hard love made to last

(c)November 20, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

[This message has been edited by paderewski (11-21-2013 09:24 PM).]

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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
1 posted 2013-11-21 07:24 PM


blocking out the rest of the world is a good thing, its just a bunch of nonsense and noise out there, only in that communication between 2 hearts is there a real p ulse
I know from where you speak of

paderewski
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since 2011-02-04
Posts 287
Louisiana, USA
2 posted 2013-11-21 07:56 PM


Thank you Emma, I think you do know where I speak of.

~*~ My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them. ~*~

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