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Tear As Lens
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Tear As Lens |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Tear As Lens Bespeak the certain glossed recall, so rich and pure in trace Though seep the parchment, heart fueled quill draws out in long embrace Then flow oh song and swallowed stillness, deeply red the taste For there remains the sweetest sound, around my breath enlaced Then fill the vessels prism view, so swelled thee overflow And linger lightly down the cheek of winter’s contour low To pool impasse the eve and end, for never called to blow Bespeak the certain glossed recall, as I have come to know Copyright Kkh 11/20/13 |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Ahhh . . . Loved this poem and the superb play on words that you gave it, and the rhyming sequence was outstanding. ~*~ My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them. ~*~ |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Though my inner creative side aches to see this as a sonnet...best not to tamper with perfection. Well done. CG |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very kind of you both. Lovely works to read here again. Thank you |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisite, as always, Kathy. I love how this rich, teardrop tapestry is cocooned within "Bespeak the certain glossed recall." Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A 'penning' most fine, Ms. K ! (REALLY nice to see you grace these blue pages once again with your words!) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thanks Folks, Ive missed you all, and happy to be back. I look forward to reading more of everyone's works. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, pure poetry this one. Loved the flow and the message. Well done. Michael |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
WOW... Love this... Diamond! Ms. E |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah . . . can stop reading now, today; I've read the best! Good seeing you again, my friend. j. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
very nice flow...James |
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KentAshbyKorb Member
since 2013-05-05
Posts 99Nc USA |
Magnificent!!! |
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