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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-11-06 10:05 AM

Gray cold November dawning
the sap of my soul falling
Emotions dormant lay
not greeting Grace for the day
No foreboding only brooding
In the cold November gray

LGR©11/6/13

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

1 posted 2013-11-06 11:16 AM

Dismal days lead to dismal thoughts. I hope it is just the weather which has caused you to have them and not something else and the weather just activates it.

~*~ Who remembers Pete Best? He was the drummer before Ringo Starr ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-11-06 11:43 AM

Well you know how it goes Paddy, sometimes your mind just can't pull a poem out of "bleh"

Lori

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2013-11-07 08:59 PM

November will do that to you, I feel it too, sweet some days, other days full of ire

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2013-11-09 11:52 AM

"No foreboding only brooding
In the cold November gray"

Ah, the summation of my life in a single sentence. Strangely, when everyone around me starts brooding this time of year, it's about the only time I ever feel like I'm part of something bigger— that maybe others actually could share in my melancholy... then the Holidays come along and put me in my place. Lol. You have better days ahead, Lori. Don't brood too long if you have an alternative.

Michael

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2013-11-13 03:05 PM

nivember moods are dark, I felt the same during few weeks, nicely done,
yann

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2013-11-26 10:59 PM

fine writing...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2013-11-29 10:45 PM

captures the month perfectly ...

November and February are most certainly my least favorite months

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