Is This The Last of Summer?

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Open Poetry #48

Is This The Last of Summer?

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2013-10-27 11:50 PM

Is This The Last of Summer?

Warmth forbids welcome
A shiver runs down my spine
Will comfort return?

The fruit now withered
As leaves fall down at my feet
Life has retreated

Frosty mornings start
Frozen surface suspends
Snow blankets all

Until summer returns
All little things stay asleep

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2013-10-29 07:04 AM

How absolutely beautiful, dear Juju. If not outside, may there be warmth inside your heart.

Margherita

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2013-11-02 09:07 PM

It is indeed over, and I too sleep more. Nice writing Juju.

Carpe' Diem

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2013-11-03 07:18 PM

pretty words giving way to sweet poetry

Gale
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since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

4 posted 2013-11-04 01:40 PM

Such a lovely season poem, Juju!
In autumn almost every poet wants to anticipate the forthcoming spring, or at least drop a hint, that this beautiful fading and frosts don't mean the end, but the early phase of the new beginning )

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

5 posted 2013-11-05 12:49 PM

Enjoyed your Haiku string.
Thanks for sharing!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2013-11-11 03:59 PM

exquisite, i love this delicate words,
yann

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