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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2013-11-15 02:44 AM



Are there words to say,
There are still some emotions left behind,
Unused yesterday
Still drifting through my softly yearning mind.

Is it possible,
With a single kiss renew,
Is it probable?

Are there touches dear,
Sweetness tender that recharge a spirit;
Beyond the old fear
That each kiss caused souls together to fit.

Is it probable
To wish one more kiss from you,
Is it possible?

Hands to hands, lips to lips, souls to souls,
Till the dawning bells softly tolls,
For us.

Gloom.

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Nan
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1 posted 2013-11-15 06:18 AM


Nice to see you and your introspective words, gloomy one..

OwlSA
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2 posted 2013-11-15 06:19 AM


Yes, Prof Gloom, these are, indeed, different words from you - and what a lovely surprise they are too - my favourite of all your beautifully written poems that I have seen!  I hope that she sees this and that she makes all your dreams come true.

Owl

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2013-12-12 06:39 AM


one can feel the warmth of your words...

M

Krawdad
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4 posted 2013-12-12 05:01 PM


If only words could do it . . .
Nice thought.

ponderthepoetorrsx
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5 posted 2013-12-12 05:27 PM


Yes i think there are words
Margherita
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6 posted 2013-12-13 12:15 PM


Very beautiful yearning, dear Professor Gloom. With these words you open your heartdoor. Just listen for the tender knocks of love!

Margherita

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7 posted 2013-12-15 02:52 PM


One can only hope.  Enjoyed the tenderness of your poem, Professor Gloom.

Merry Christmas.
Alison

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2013-12-15 05:42 PM


Soft and tender words from the heart, lovely Professor Gloom. Much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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