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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2013-10-19 07:23 PM


         Bleak November

Tonight a violent, bitter wind
stirs the deep, dark woods
beneath a frosty midnight moon
with the outside world  
awash in cold silver
as the last Autumn leaves
rain against the window;
and a few ragged, purposeless
clouds race by to destinations
   uncertain.
It is an eve for Summer thoughts,
a stone-fire hearth, and candle-lit
dreaming of my one true love,
   though far away,
to chase the Wintry chill of
body, mind, heart, and spirit
as bleak November comes early.

                  --- b. e. adams (10/19/2013)



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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
1 posted 2013-10-19 08:48 PM


I know that bleak November, but there is beauty in its starkness, the barest of branches against the blackest of nights, and you do know this too
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2013-10-20 02:09 AM


The most beautiful weather report, I have ever read, Bruce.  I just know that she reads it too.  

Owl

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2013-11-12 09:13 PM


nice...James
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2013-11-13 03:00 PM


very nice and fecond parallele between bleak november and the november mind

have a nice day


yann

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2013-11-17 07:08 PM


A stark and desolate picture of great beauty. Bruce.
                         Ida

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