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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest 
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In multiples of 3 they come and weave between the falling rain reds roam north, yellows float and blues caress the ailing green one strays east, taps my face, and wakes me to this golden day umbrella's tossed my arms raise up to touch the magic a leaf can bring |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Scratching my head on this one. Sometimes I go completely blank and are unable to decipher the meaning of poetry. This is one of those times. Sorry Emma. ~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
that's okay. I kind of left it without any 'clues', more open to suggestion if someone finds something in it. thanks for stopping by though, always appreciate  the read. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I saw "thoughts", my friend, memories passing through... good piece. j. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very well penned! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisite as always, Emma Rose. Although Autumn here is different, I totally relate in my soul, to tossing an umbrella aside to feel leaves rich with colour and dance and their own histories, blowing in my face and yes, I, too, would throw up my arms in glorious celebration of the moment. This poem is the epitome of why I never miss reading any EmmaRose poem I see. Love it, love it, LOVE IT! Owl [This message has been edited by OwlSA (10-20-2013 10:50 AM).] |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Falling leaves! I love the image! Autumn would seem gray and bleak if only there were no coloured leaves and umbrellas ) |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
thanks so much for all your kind words and for being here |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
colorful nod to the mix of beauty and lament of Autumn passing ... |
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