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Open Poetry #48

Ramble and Muse

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2013-10-18 02:52 AM

What is this person of these times,
Lost within fantasies and rhyme.

Because the reality is growing stark,
Greater gloom defines everyday
Till light is just as the dark
Hiding things you should see along the way,
Where is your reality going?
What is our reality growing?

Feelings that might have been sure
Have become tainted by the pain,
Nothing is finely done or close to pure,
Every shirt or blouse has a stain,
Seen or unseen it is still there bold,
Believed or not, silently or widely told.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2013-10-19 08:06 AM

I always try not to read you too deeply or I will begin to feel even more depressed than what some days bring to me.

As Always,
M

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2013-11-03 03:27 AM

This is worth going to the top again! Well written and thought provoking...

Enjoyed the gloom, Gloom. It makes me realize how to accept reality, yet I like the idea of having a ticket to flee when it gets too thick!

miscellanea

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