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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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...streaming sunlight cast long tree shadow onto me and into the clearing. Tall carved pillars, wrecked abutments strewed in tangled undergrowth. Looking up to see you standing under the ruined arch, wind blowing your hair,glint of light in mantis green eyes, softly looking at me, strength coursed into my being again, becoming once more vivified.Speaking to my mind, you said ''we must go,i have waited long enough,come follow me to the shadows''..... Peace is not only better than war, but infinitely more arduous - George - Bernard Shaw. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sounds wonderful to me  M |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This would be a most fitting and satisfying mystic follow-on of the cinematographic dénouement in your poem “Remain” but the mind-talk saddens the reader into the realisation that it was probably just an illusion, a dream. Exquisitely executed . . . are you involved in the production of movies? If not, perhaps you should be. Owl |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
M thank you for you kind words Goldernsoe Peace is not only better than war, but infinitely more arduous - George - Bernard Shaw. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
owl...you are correct...this poem is a follow on to Remain...i am hoping to keep adding more so perhaps keep an eye out for more? No i am not involved with film production, i just like to use words to allow people to see using their minds eye and imagination...thank you for the words of encouragement.. Goldenrose. Peace is not only better than war, but infinitely more arduous - George - Bernard Shaw. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, yes, Goldenrose, I will keep looking out for more. The series is intriguing and excellently written and I do so enjoy excellence, and the fact that it is wrapped up in Nature, adds to my enjoyment of it. Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
now this 'write,' in my opinion, is absolutely superb! (Grand-fine imagery and Romanticism!) |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent writing, Phil. Ida |
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