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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2013-10-15 05:53 PM


I've heard so many
Harsh words in my time
Sent a few too
It's nice to have another
Send a different view

Someone thinking of me
Sending kind words
Could rekindle a hope
In Gods love and loving me

How wonderful life would be
If life could be poetry

With happy endings
And constant romance
People always willing
To give others a fair chance

Moon light and stars
To guide our way
Candle light shadows
For our body games

If only we took the time
To live poetry and rhyme

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved

© Copyright 2013 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
1 posted 2013-10-15 07:52 PM


I do so understand this lovely sentiment; if only to live in poem, sometimes a glimmer is nice though
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2013-10-17 10:23 PM


Nice...James
Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
3 posted 2013-10-18 02:31 AM


Oh, it's very thought-provoking!
I think that poetry is concentrated life, and not every poem has a happy end.
But luckily poetry much less speaks rude words.

Thank you for sharing!

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
4 posted 2013-10-18 02:57 AM


If I had nothing but time
And nothing to do but rhyme,
I am sure I could become content
Yet these days I have little time spent
In the words of meter and rhyme.

enjoyed yours,
Gloom

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