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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2013-10-11 07:41 PM



The water
is much
sweeter now

Now, that you
cannot taste it

Much better
than when
you were
submerged within

and the water
had no taste

Everything there
is better now

Now, that you
cannot get there

Much better
than when
you were
deep within

and location
had no place

The emptiness
is much fuller now

Now, that
you've seen
the cornucopia

Much better than
the half Planck moment
prior to conception
of dystopia

Life there
is much more
blissful now

Now, that you're
pre premortem

Much better
than when
you arose
within

and evacuated
due to
boredom

I know you're
never get there

Only here
can you
pursue it

but do

Doer, do

For without
you

there's
really
nothing
to it.

***

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Gale
Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
1 posted 2013-10-11 08:59 PM


Love this piece!
Thank you for sharing!
It's so thoughtful, and the end is stunning.

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