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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2013-10-10 01:02 PM


crossing the
speedway
one brave snail


clouded by
falling leaves
the Autumn moon


while I talk to
the twilight forest
falling leaves


Ancient oak grove
the sound of
acorn rain


deep in the Autumn
forest calm
one red leaf
surfs the mountain
    stream


Sad and lonely
the Autumn dusk


gently dripping dew
and spider webs
jewels of the
morning star


Autumn evening chill
this wayward wanderer
surprised by the moon

sad beauty
the last falling
leaf of Autumn


awake or a dream
the beautiful stranger
by moonlight


deep Autumn
night bird song
the music of heaven


Moonlit forest
so many pathways
to choose
through Autumn
    leaves
  

Rainbow leaves
beneath a cloudy
Autumn sky
change everywhere
in the wind


crimson oak leaves
dance against a
deep  azure sky
pure Autumn joy


though youth and joy
are lost to the waking
   world
we are still children
in our dreams

... or:

though time and youth
   are fleeting
we are still children
in our memories and
     dreams

Zen 'Romanticism':

your love
has lowered
the drawbridge
of my heart


Wrapped in the
comforter of
your love
I shall laugh at
the Winter chill



my dream
is your kiss
in the Summer
  rain

              --- b. e. adams (10/11/2013)



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Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
1 posted 2013-10-10 06:17 PM


Autumn is a very inspiring time )

Love your poem, especially these lines:

"Wrapped in the
comforter of
your love
I shall laugh at
the Winter chill
my dream
is your kiss
in the Summer
  rain"

It's so true!

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

2 posted 2013-10-10 11:45 PM


favorite part:

"clouded by
falling leaves
the Autumn moon"

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2013-10-11 08:33 AM


"crimson oak leaves
dance against a
deep  azure sky
pure Autumn joy"

Although I enjoyed it all~~  this  spoke to me. Now if it would just stop raining  so I can enjoy the  changing colors before they all fall from the trees.

M



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