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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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Virginia

0 posted 2013-10-08 06:57 AM




Sacred ground...untouched by man;
Where Nature is still reigning Lord.
By the stream, a twisted hollow oak stands,
Where the Whitetails drink and ford.

Places that by grace have gone unscathed;
These hallowed grounds I roam...
Greedy eyes have yet to focus upon
these parcels I call home.

Sacred places that surround you...
Gentle and peaceful, Harsh and mean !
Left and right and all around you...
Their precious spoils, yet to glean.

Perhaps you catch a fleeting glimpse...
But, they are seldom ever seen.
For, they play no part in your daily lives;

They're just places...in between.

They escape your eye as you hurry by;
In your heaps of steel and chrome;
These tiny, scattered Edens...
These parcels I call home.

You see the bloated carcasses...
Discarded objects...
trash and me...
As I sprint across your life-line...
to enter these leafy canopies.

Lifeless eyes,
within a ditch;
A mongrel stray
thats been struck down.

To the hurriers,
he's a horror;
That makes them gag
in route to town.

The workers of the highway come...
and shovel him from the scene;
He met his demise
at the gates of Paradise;

Seeking places...in between.

At night, as I lay
'neath the hollowed oak...
She emits an eerie moan...

Sounds of mourning...
for smitten lovers...
of scattered Edens,
We call home.

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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2013-10-08 07:59 AM


You will be glad to know, Larry, that not all of us miss out on seeing those places.  They are the only ones I see.  For me the places of steel and chrome are the places in between.  But thank you for writing so beautifully about those places of Eden.

Aching tears for the doggy, whether real, symbolic or fictional.  

Owl

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
2 posted 2013-10-08 08:55 AM


((((OwlSA)))   ::smiles::  I'm very glad to know.   Thank you for seeing and for sharing.  Thank you for taking time to read.  Oh, and the doggy is very  real, symbolic and fictional.
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2013-10-08 10:51 AM


At night, as I lay
'neath the hollowed oak...
She emits an eerie moan...

Sounds of mourning...
for smitten lovers...
of scattered Edens,
We call home.


Another excellent poetic creation from you, dear Larry. Too many indeed don't see! Poignant is also the story of the dog who entered paradise on a highway, it happens too often and it is very sad indeed.

Margherita

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