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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2013-09-25 01:59 PM


            Sartori (#2):

1. the spontaneous awareness
    of the true nature of reality;
2. being fully present in the
       moment

Under a cold-vacant moon,
all final traces of Summer subtly
slip away on an Autumn evening
   breeze,
that heralds endless transience
   and change,
beneath an infinite mantle
of tremulous stars and
spinning galaxies,
above this silvered meadow,
here along the boundless
deep-forest edge and 'endless'
hills where ancient spirits
shadow-dance in and out
of ancestral memories
and our finest dreams,
celebrate this precious
moment  of the ‘now,’
hung on the cusp of eternity,
from which all that is truly
   ‘real’ emerges
including this grand and lasting
   love
that shall talk against time.

               --- b. e. adams (9/25/2013)



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Margherita
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1 posted 2013-09-26 12:26 PM


quote:
beneath an infinite mantle
of tremulous stars and
spinning galaxies,
above this silvered meadow,


This is beautifully inspiring, dear Bruce!

Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2013-09-26 02:21 PM


Thanks so much, Margherita!
OwlSA
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3 posted 2013-10-26 06:37 AM


How did I miss this

"precious
moment of the 'now' "?

Beautiful, Bruce, as always.

Owl

paderewski
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since 2011-02-04
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4 posted 2013-10-26 01:48 PM


You weave words together and make them special. Every line of this poem is meaningful and special from your hand.

~*~ Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes. ~*~

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