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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 09-25-2013 05:19 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos


I had a dream that I would write
A verse too beautiful to read
A verse that quenched the thirst of thirst
The love of love, the need of need

A verse that flowed like water
From my soul
And in its eloquence it testified
To all the joy and pain
I ever knew.
It was a dream of you

Before the dawn reached out its palest light
A flower bloomed from seed
And in the night
I wrote a verse too beautiful to read

Elizabeth Santos
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Margherita
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Eternity


1 posted 09-25-2013 06:09 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Wow, dear Elizabeth, this is stunning! The night's treasures sometimes remain hidden indeed. And you expressed yourself masterfully as always.

Hugs.
Margherita
OwlSA
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2 posted 09-25-2013 06:12 AM       View Profile for OwlSA   Email OwlSA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OwlSA

Exquisite, Liz, it brought tears to my eyes . . . I hate to spoil things for you, though, in telling you that all your poetry is too beautiful to read - when I see your name, I hone in on your poem, knowing that what I will find is beautiful beyond beautiful.

Owl
Nan
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3 posted 09-25-2013 07:08 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I needed a smile this morning, Liz - Thank you
JerryPat2
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4 posted 09-25-2013 08:25 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Hard to come up with anything which hasn't been said Elizabeth, but I can, and will, say that your Muse was working overtime when you penned this one. Excellent!

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
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5 posted 09-25-2013 11:27 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

This is that verse, Elizabeth. Absolutely beautiful.
                         Ida
Dakota
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6 posted 09-27-2013 04:55 AM       View Profile for Dakota   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dakota

Beautiful indeed!
Kit McCallum
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7 posted 09-27-2013 09:14 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh, I love the theme of this dear Liz. You are a master of this art, and anything you write, is beautiful indeed.

Best wishes and sending a hug,
/Kit
Namyh
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8 posted 09-27-2013 05:02 PM       View Profile for Namyh   Email Namyh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Namyh

Liz - It's amazing from where we poets get our inspiration. Looks like you got yours from Love. Enjoyed the craft of your words. Namyh
Denise
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9 posted 09-28-2013 03:27 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely!
Toerag
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Ala bam a


10 posted 09-30-2013 07:51 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Wonder if this lady will ever run out of incredible poetry?
rosepetals36
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11 posted 10-10-2013 09:17 PM       View Profile for rosepetals36   Email rosepetals36   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals36

I liked

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :)

luminosity
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12 posted 12-27-2013 05:59 PM       View Profile for luminosity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for luminosity

wow.......stunning....beautiful...your dream come true
JamesMichael
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13 posted 12-27-2013 07:52 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

very nice...James
 
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