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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2013-09-24 03:58 AM


WHEN WE TOUCH
10 September 2013

Embracing the light
that is the essence of us
we blend
and swirl
like deep ocean currents
like high-sky thermals
like song and dance
like tremble-moan poetry
our need hungry and wild
gentle and tender
and in joy
and bliss
like a musical note
too high for sound
we melt
into each other.

Owl

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2013-09-24 02:22 PM


Love the images you have conjoured here.

~L  

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2013-09-24 02:47 PM


Thanks, Lori.  Smiles.

Owl

EmmaRose
Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
3 posted 2013-09-25 07:12 PM


sweet and magical, like floating in air,not touching down
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2013-09-25 07:19 PM


Thank you, EmmaRose.

Owl

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
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U.S , Ca
5 posted 2013-09-25 10:39 PM


Mmm magic realism (: sweet
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
6 posted 2013-09-26 02:17 AM


Thank you.

Owl

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