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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-09-23 07:53 AM



this tranquility of a cool soft breeze
gives me pleasure
I sit here thanking karma
most of the time when people speak of karma
it has to do with someone
getting their just comeuppance
I am living proof
karma can be a very good thing
it was to me
although I would be the first to say
I did not deserve it
those who have know me
over the years
understand about my dark past
I wronged
those who tried to love me
leaving behind
Marionette
especially Nannette
(I seemed to have a thing about those "ette's")
karma
talking about good karma here
I'm talking about Paula
Patricia and Nick
my children
who I never thought I would know
I was looked up and I was found
KARMA is good

(c)September 21, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2013 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2013-09-23 08:33 AM


Karma is a wierd and wonderful thing... Especially when taken with a healthy dose of reincarnation. So the rule of thumb of living by the Golden Rule is a safe bet. I'm glad you have had some good Karma come up and slap you on the back.

Lori  

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-09-23 08:42 AM


I'm glad and fortunate too, Lori. Thank you so much for continuing to follow here at the Blue Room.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
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3 posted 2013-09-25 06:30 AM


Some of the wisest people have gone through hell before gaining enlightenment. But after having hit the bottom, the rise to the top can be swift.
This is a very significant write and I am glad for you and your children that the bad karma has been healed.

Margherita

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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4 posted 2013-09-25 07:15 PM


may you all continue the blessings received and given, this is nice to read
JerryPat2
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5 posted 2013-09-25 07:18 PM


Thank you so much, Margherita, for your kind words.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2013-09-25 07:19 PM


Emma, I so appreciate your touching comments.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

ponderthepoetorrsx
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7 posted 2013-09-25 10:30 PM


Interesting, it has a certain charm to it.
JerryPat2
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8 posted 2013-09-26 05:49 AM


Thank you, ponderthepoetorrsx, I appreciate you being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2013-09-27 09:22 AM


I love the beauty and mystery of Karma, Jerry. Positive or negative, it's amazing how the universe finds ways to brings things together and form a balance. You've got my thoughts pondering here with this piece, and I enjoy that very much.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2013-09-27 10:37 AM


Thank you very much, Kit. I'm a living example that good things can happen if you but keep striving to that end. I am most fortunate. Thank you for reading and expressing yourself about this poem.

~*~ I don't have to eat sarcasm to recognize the flavor. ~*~

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