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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-09-22 11:06 AM





At last
the dawn has arrived
with chill in tow
The promise of comfy soft sleeves
and warm cuddling comforters
on the 'morrow
The death of unbearable sweat
is finally met
I am free to be in
the shorten sun again
My monochromatic green horizon
slowly show variegated leaves
In the autumn
I am revived
LGR(C)9/22/13

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-09-22 11:15 AM


I feel you will have many who can relate to this "cooling" poem of yours this morning. I, too, love autumn and what it brings . . . Very well worded poetry, Lori!

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2013-09-22 11:18 AM


Thank you my friend!

~L

poetically ghetto
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3 posted 2013-09-22 09:07 PM


lori there is nothing better than an autumn breeze and nothing better than you writing an ode to remind us of that reliable sweater
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2013-09-22 10:48 PM


My favorite time of year Eric.

Lori

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