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poetically ghetto Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 100 |
This love has left me all alone. There's no one there to hold me close. No one there to let love lie. This love has left me high and dry. This love has left what will love say? When love takes leave What can one say? Shredded words they hit the mark. And where there's blood there will be sharks. Don't tell me that you flung the dart. The dart which tore straight to my heart. Shredded words which slice and chisel. I look forward to the daily whistle. I look forward to the final touch. I look forward for iv'e seen to much. eric Martinez 2013 |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I am sorry that you are in pain. Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Gut-wrenching. ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Eric The more I read this the more I read into it. Is there a subtle shift I detected at the end? I like that there is more to this. Lori  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very nicely put, my friend. j. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...James |
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poetically ghetto Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 100 |
thank you for the kind comments and im sorry owl if you have the impression that I feel sad I just have the ability to dig up emotions that I have once encountered experiences always live within and lisa you were right towards the end of the poem I am no longer willing to deal with this pain I am ready to move on |
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