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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2013-09-20 02:10 AM

SWEET, SWEET WINE
5 January 2013

I am intoxicated by your sweet wine words
expressed with feather-fine brushstrokes
and you wrap your sensuous arms
around my quivering heart
and we melt in the melding tremors
of our wonder-mails
that have fulfilled our yearnings
to soak up the sunshine
and to listen to the rain
as one,

and the autumn of our days
has a spring in its step
and a summer in its heart
to warm the winter
of our nights
with kisses
wilder than wine.

Owl

poetically ghetto
Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 100

1 posted 2013-09-20 02:38 AM

this is a true poetic piece of heavenly bliss. sweet sweet wine indeed very deep and meaningful thoughts

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2013-09-20 04:04 AM

Thank you for your kind words, poetically ghetto.

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-09-20 06:44 AM

I relate. Big time.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2013-09-20 06:47 AM

Thank you, Jerry.

Owl

MICHELMAS
Member

since 2012-02-15

Posts 305
Lancashire England

5 posted 2013-09-20 07:56 AM

Red red wine, in the fire light glow
Romantic
Michael

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2013-09-20 08:08 AM

Thank you, Michael.

Owl

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2013-09-20 10:45 AM

Yeah . . . (enough said!)

jimmy

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2013-09-20 11:04 AM

Thank you (I think, lol), Jimmy.

Owl

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

9 posted 2013-09-20 03:57 PM

intoxicating

with or without wine

the poetry hits the right spot

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

10 posted 2013-09-20 04:42 PM

Thank you, Emma Rose. Smiles.

Owl

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

11 posted 2013-09-21 12:00 PM

grand-fine Romanticism!

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

12 posted 2013-09-21 03:04 AM

Diana, beautiful and an Autumn love is more then ever a summer one was believe it.
Love to you, jo

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

13 posted 2013-09-21 08:28 AM

Lovely romantic write, Diana.
Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

14 posted 2013-09-21 08:35 AM

Thank you, Bruce, Martyjo and Ida.

Unfortunately, this is an old poem from January, which is in our summer, but, that was still a lovely thought, thank you, Martyjo.

Owl

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

15 posted 2013-09-21 04:38 PM

It is so good to read you again! And of course this poem reminded me of a song

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

16 posted 2013-09-21 04:47 PM

Thank you, Karilea! Smiles.

Red, red wine?

Owl

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2013-09-21 06:46 PM

silky romantic writing...James

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

18 posted 2013-09-21 06:52 PM

Thank you, James.

Owl

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