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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2013-09-19 09:45 AM



with the whisper mystery of dawn
her aurola moon jutting uncovered round
protruding and then you smile at the color

like the spelling could be areola sounds
but your arms are crossed as if tempting
before you reach for coffee by accident

and ask me what I imagine at that moment
about how it tastes with cream and sugar
as the residue that lingers for hours

and could I handle a second cup if offered

________

Dark

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2013-09-19 11:03 AM


You have done it again. Caught my eye, caught my imagination and made my coffee so much spicier.

Thanks for the morning peek.
Ali-san

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2013-09-19 11:33 AM


Ms Ali-san...always a pleasure to share a morning sipsation with you.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2013-09-19 07:37 PM


So good to read you once again D.
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2013-09-19 07:55 PM


Ms E...thank you


poetically ghetto
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5 posted 2013-09-20 02:50 AM


I could just imagine how potent that second cup would be I really liked these thoughts and descriptions
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2013-09-20 04:53 AM


PG...thank you for the review
Margherita
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7 posted 2013-10-10 10:36 AM




Now, what about a dessert serving, created by you ... I think we can handle it?

This is lovely.

Margherita

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2013-10-22 10:18 PM


enjoyed...James
Krawdad
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9 posted 2013-10-23 01:45 AM


And a well placed chuckle for the end.

Zinsser
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10 posted 2013-10-28 04:07 PM


~~ Nice ~~
Its been a long time

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

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