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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2013-09-17 10:31 PM



Beautiful Lover


Sometimes she's in
my arms
but always in
my thoughts,
even when
we're far apart
she's close
to my heart,
once it begins
it never ends,
beautiful lovers
again and again.


JamesLee
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2013


    


    



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-09-18 06:08 AM


Yeah, beautiful lovers, that's the meat of the situation.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2013-09-18 06:25 AM


Aw, this is a aweet one too! You guys are so mushy this morning you bring tears to my eyes.


Lori

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3 posted 2013-09-18 10:23 AM


Nice, James.
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4 posted 2013-09-18 12:44 PM


what a short sweet loving tribute to love I am sure many can relate to these words
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5 posted 2013-09-18 05:14 PM


Simply sweet, enjoyed this indeed.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2013-09-21 06:24 PM


Thank you Jerry, Lori, Alison, poetically ghetto and ken for the nice responses...James
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