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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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Michigan

0 posted 2013-09-08 09:55 PM



He played with her lips
like a shadows run against the weeded grass
following the river wild

One by one
touching the echoes of
each side of her hips
swaying one way to the alleyway
swinging back into his soft side.

Her hair
past the coat of brunette
straight
tightly wrapped
around her shoulders
like the pages of her skin
turning to rose, red

As tears of a storm
overshadowed, overcast
shelter,
the coughs hidden sound behind the winds draft
to the quiet prelude
their kiss
the chance for her heart to be touched by his
and her arm to slightly curl around his broad shoulders.

As she touched the bottom of her feet
towards the wet dews of the fields
with her eyes under the small rivers heart
resting on the pigeon filled trees
basking in the light
on the pitch of June night.

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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
1 posted 2013-09-09 09:06 AM


this touches those sacred spots that we don't even know we have until someone, something fills them with such glory
Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2013-09-09 02:19 PM


Emma-

Thank you for the kind words...happy you enjoyed and touched a piece of you.  Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2013-09-10 10:24 PM


enjoyed...James
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