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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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We never said good bye the wind blew in all directions like a last hurrah. The time changed and leaves fell the chill of winter and mixed emotions settled like a flurry breathing in whispers dusted white. The skyline cleared long after the springtime of my life treasures buried deep beyond reason between shadows of the seasons. I keep you near and dear to my heart passing by through my minds eye missing you there in those moments we shared knowing we are never going back. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (09-06-2013 10:09 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Well done reminiscing of the past. Though hurtful you have found a way to miss what you had in a good way. Sometimes things were just not meant to be. I very much liked the tone of this. ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY well 'penned,' indeed! |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Nicely done. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
the memory is sweet long after the wind scatters the pieces of once upon a time romance of the heart real smooth........... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
JP~ Thank you for reading my poem and understanding the feelings that inspired me. DP~ I thank you very much for your nice reply. Tim~ Thank you, nice to know you were here. Emma~ Thank you for your lovely reply sweet lady. I know it sounds cliche but I do appreciate you guys so much! Thanks again for taking the time to read and leave a little something for me. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
This tugs at my heart strings, dear Bluesy Gal! If we miss something/someone it means it was very special to us so I'm not sure if one can ever really miss it in a "good way" - in the heart that is no matter what the mind knows. Just a big sigh now for everyone because we all can miss so much if we're a certain type of person. Sometimes I envy those who can totally block out "yesterday". That said, stunning poem! So good to see you here again. Helen |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Just beautiful, Blues, but then I always find something special about your poetry. Ida |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Helen...yesterday is gone at the same yesterday is a beautiful memory. Life is going to take its course and for me, I just have to let it be. thanks again. What a nice thing to say Ida. I thank you very much. |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Put me in the perfect mood. "beyond reason between shadows of the season" Nice, that sings to me like a song. This feels like the easing from summer into fall and of a May to September love wilting away. Dig it! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Blues it is good to read you again. The changing of the seasons can conjure up all kinds of things...I like that it brought out this poem in you! Lori  |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Those fleeting moments are the best, aren't they? Those are the memories we won't forget. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Powerful imagery. I loved it, even though it was sad overall, you've preserved something precious in this that you will always have. Beautifully done. Michael |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"I keep you near and dear to my heart passing by through my minds eye missing you there in those moments we shared knowing we are never going back." I can relate to this verse especially, Lor. Nice to be visiting and reading some of the best from the best today~~  M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue..like the scent of a familiar street with a corner booth view to replay those special songs strangers selected at random..enjoyed this |
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