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Open Poetry #48

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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-09-04 07:46 AM

an unnatural glow
hovers around the streetlight
a forbearer
of what might be yet to come
perhaps
its almost dawn
the glow of the light pulses
there's no sound
absolute silence permeate the darkness
except for the man's heartbeat
unaware what is behind the pulsating glow

©August 1, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2013-09-04 08:12 AM

Understanding the thought behind this, Jerry.
Ida

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-09-04 09:21 AM

Fear of the unknown is a gripping fear. Appreciate your thoughts on the poem, Ida.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2013-09-04 05:14 PM

that is a paralizing fear for me Jerry. Nice write my friend!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-09-04 05:18 PM

Thank you so much, Lori. Most of us have problems with such as what I described.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

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