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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-08-27 07:01 AM


Jill had two very big . . . er . . . eyes,
And she could look at you and lie.
Jack was well-endowed with a big . . . er . . . grin,
And he was randy when on sloe gin.
Now Jack and Jill lay down to . . . er . . . sleep,
And as they did Jack did it deep.
Jill said she thought it was shorter,
Jack said, Good, give me back my quarter.

(c)August 8, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

I think this will be my last post. I hate it, but the place continues to be dead insofar as readers and comments. I don't get it, and I haven't in a long time.


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[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-27-2013 11:06 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2013-08-29 09:28 PM


Can't help but smile and shake my head and remember high school days and bathroom walls. Just goes to show you are never too old to bring out your inner child for a little play time.

Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-08-29 09:39 PM


Thank you Lori, very much appreciated.

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BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2013-08-31 09:59 PM


er...ummm
...did you ever get your quarter back?

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-08-31 10:07 PM


After I caught her, Blues. She's faster than I would have thought. Thanks for your read and comment.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

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