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OwlSA
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0 posted 2013-08-04 03:41 AM



THE SILENCE OF SOUNDS
3 August 2013

It was the way
the night wind
broke up the silence
into pockets of longing;

and for solace
and understanding
her eyes caressed
the wall of books
all known and loved
on the other side
of her yellow-wooded desk;

and she filled the desolate silences
between the dirges
of the wind’s mournful singing,
with their beloved words.

Owl

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2013-08-04 10:25 AM


I know that kind of setting and the feelings all-too-well
(particularly the joy and comfort of books and poetry of course) ...

v. well 'penned' indeed!

OwlSA
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2 posted 2013-08-04 04:32 PM


Thank you, Bruce.  I am glad you felt it so well.

Owl

EmmaRose
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3 posted 2013-08-04 07:31 PM


On those nights, the company of great literature will soothe the soul, with the
wind's accompaniment.  I can see the picture most vividly; it's a lovely one

OwlSA
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4 posted 2013-08-04 10:12 PM


Thank you, EmmaRose, for your beautiful, poetic reply.

Owl

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5 posted 2013-08-04 11:08 PM


Such lovely places, books are. Most of my free time is spent in them, and on occasion, they lull me in to the best nights sleep. Beautiful write.
OwlSA
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6 posted 2013-08-05 01:17 AM


Yes, they are, Kaoru, a world of their own.  Thank you for your reply.

Owl

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2013-08-05 02:17 AM


Books have always been my comfort too, Diana.
Lovely poem.
                         Ida

OwlSA
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8 posted 2013-08-05 02:43 AM


I am glad, Ida, for they are, indeed, a comfort.

Owl

Shirley Knott
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9 posted 2013-08-05 06:13 PM


Owl,
I felt that poem of yours all the way over here. I enjoyed it very much.
SEK

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10 posted 2013-08-06 09:12 AM


Don't know how I missed this one, Owl. The word[lay here is just fantastic . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~*~

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11 posted 2013-08-06 10:08 PM


Nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

OwlSA
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12 posted 2013-08-07 01:31 AM


Thank you, Shirley, swampguy and Kitty-Kat.

Owl

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2013-08-07 10:34 PM


enjoyed...James
secondhanddreampoet
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14 posted 2013-08-07 10:59 PM


I'm back for a second 'read' of this one ... so well done!
OwlSA
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15 posted 2013-08-08 02:58 AM


Thank you, James.

Thank you, Bruce, for enjoying it so much.

Owl

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