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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest 
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you dangled your leaf in this night of recession when I struggle to sanctify the day from the deed in the grace of the yellow in the windsweeping moment, you bought back an exit, for the flatlining me [This message has been edited by EmmaRose (07-31-2013 07:18 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Interesting combination of dreary thought, Emma. Not to fear, I am well acquainted with dreary thought, as least I used to be. Keep writing, you will eventually write yourself out of the darkness. I did. you can. ~*~ Did you hear about the cross eyed teacher who lost her job because she couldn't control her pupils? ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
truthfully I left the darkness ions agao..I just find vanilla so boring, I mean how much could I write about being saved.lol So I revisit for inspiratioin at times.. (just a bit about me  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Really nice poem EmmaRose. I can also appreciate your reply to JP, vanilla is so safe it's the darkness and the feelings they conjur up that tend to make for good poetry....inspite of ourselves. Always a pleasure to read you~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Whilst I differ about vanilla (but what would the world be if we were replicas of each other?) and find that it can be soft-slow comforting when discovered from a slanted gaze - this poem, as all of yours, is beautiful beyond beautiful. Owl |
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